Saturday, April 20, 2013

Once Upon a Time?

Thought I'd post a snippet from a story I'm working on. All comments welcome (I'd hate to spend years writing a story no one wants to read).


The music was empty—hollow beats bouncing off hollow walls and hollow lyrics filling the hollows of my ears. Maybe it was what I needed; I wished I could enjoy the numbness that was washing over the rest of my friends. The pain was too deep; the guilt was too vast. And the fear! It was one thing to fear the police or the factions… This mafia-esque lifestyle was built on fear; I’d known that when I’d gone searching for answers. The real fear was that I’d already found my answer and this was all there was. But, I was in too deep for that to matter; no matter how many bodies I saw, how many children I failed to save, how many friends I lost, or how much blood stained my own hand. I took an oath—the music couldn’t erase that.